Im speaking nonsense

You are a social nightmare.

Yet you trust people whom you dont know

But the people you do know,

You have no such thing as trust.

You NEED attention from something,

when reality doesnt give you anything. 

 

But when reality cathes up with you and your "fantasy"

you shy away and start your rampage of lying. 

 

Most of your so called friends dont even know your real name.

Your identity is unknown

but your actions are well known.  

 

You try every waking minute

to convice yourself that your okay, that your fine,

thats its all just in your mind.

 

Tears stream down your face

As your heart beats at a steady pace.

 

Your shallow and have a s****y personality

but that my friend would be an under statement for you. 

 

You do what you want

but you care what people think

You say what you want

but fear what they say back

 

 

Author's Note

Not even close to done. Need some major work done, Also needs a good title for it

Reviews

[The Winter Grey]

Also, I'd keep the title. I think it's genius.

[The Winter Grey]

Done or not, your meaning comes through very well. I think we all (unfortunately) have people like this in our lives. I especially love the last stanza, the contrast of the subject's fantasy contrasting with the stark reality they try to avoid... that alone completely MAKES this piece. Well done :)

[Sleeping Maiden]

It's really good for being not done! I love how it is and how powerful your words are. You speak the truth here. Lovely piece. I really enjoyed reading this.

[TurtleClark]

for being no where near done its pretty fricking good

[Danielle]

It's pretty good for not being close to being done!

[Maximillion]

i can relate it good

[Angelic Surrender]

I like it. It does seem a little scrambled up, but still. I think it's a good concept and with a little work it'll make an awesome poem. Great work

True that friend it sounds like my life it's really repeatable you know....

The only thing is the INNOCENCE part got me weird because everyone is so... lost these days it seems. Especially the teens we don't know who we are yet and may never find out... I know somewhat I know what I wanna look like and all the unimportant shi-.

Great poem over all you're an awesome writer. :O)

Oh yeah for the title what about... Words are Aspirations... I don't know I'm not good with titles either... 6-6 I'm tired too...

[Secret Valentine]

I like this. very dark and yet i find myself in this writing. It's so great and i love the detail in the words that are so emotional as well. Good job