Desire strikes like a Corba

Desire strikes like a Corba

A Poem by Perfect Mistake

Im kind of liking this

This blood thing.

Fetish? Fixations?

Not quite an obsession yet,

I can see it growing into that.

 

I understand why people liked the feel of slicing their flesh,

realeasing bottled-up hurt.

 

Unable to slip into sleep,

Unable to fall into dreams,

Unable to lie completely still,

Snared by tangled thoughts.

Yeah it stings.

But at least i feel something.

 Something besides hunger

Something besides fear.

Weird i always thought cutters were sick.

Sicker than me.

But with one swipe.

I understand why they do it.

Why they like it.

Even though they hate it.

 

I liked the way exposed flesh looks, all pinkish white. It looks new, although i know

that isnt right.

© 2012 Perfect Mistake


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Perfect Mistake
Wrote this awhile back...

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I think this is a dark deep side of you that only few ppl know about including yourself. its really good to expose that side. Cutting is damaging i know from experience and i know alot of close people to my heart that used to or still does. if this is their mind set or even my mind set, it scares me and it is something i never want to go back too.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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thumbs up WOOOOOOOP :O0

Posted 12 Years Ago


I think this is a dark deep side of you that only few ppl know about including yourself. its really good to expose that side. Cutting is damaging i know from experience and i know alot of close people to my heart that used to or still does. if this is their mind set or even my mind set, it scares me and it is something i never want to go back too.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Perfect Mistake
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