To the people that say I need help

To the people that say I need help

A Poem by Perfect Mistake

"We'll get you help, you'll be fixed again"

I'm sorry but was I ever broken?

 

You say you know what's best for me

I'm sorry do you even know me? 

 

You talk to your friends about your long-lost cause daughter.

I'm sorry but did I ever have a cause?

 

"We've really worried about her"

I'm sorry but when have you showed affection for me? 

 

Were always here for you Zoey

I'm sorry but where were you when it all came crashing down?

 

 

© 2012 Perfect Mistake


Author's Note

Perfect Mistake
NOT FINISHED

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continue.............. :) SMILe :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like this one a lot. It's really uniquely done and I can't wait to read the rest of it :) Good job

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really like this . It reminds me of my own family

Posted 13 Years Ago


Your writing is something to admire. I can relate well to this, my parents forced me into counseling and a hospital cause they thought something was wrong with me. I hated them for a long time for that but now I think they are just paranoid people.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Regardless of it's not being finished, good so far, you can be sure that I'll read it when you finish :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on March 17, 2012
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Perfect Mistake
Perfect Mistake

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