Fire Dream

I once had a dream

That was full of fire

Full of all the hate in the world

 

Corruption is everywhere

And fire follows in its wakes

Governments are corrupt,

And fire razes them down

 

Proverty is everywhere

And fire is always with them

People go hungry,

And the fire burns them out

 

Injustice is everywhere

And fire plays with it

People get killed,

And fire laughs in your faace

 

I once had a dream of fire

That was full of fire

The fire never went away

Fire stayed 'til the end of time

Author's Note

Piece of writing i wrote in 8th grade

Reviews

[Death Stalker]

Impressive work, in fact, some of these I'll be happy to join the fire and kill the injustice people and whatnot. :D

[MrOldFashioned]

truer words were never spoken, my dear.

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Without being too political, makes me think of The Who, "Meet the new boss, same as the old boss" Sums up my thoughts on presidential elections.

[Distant horizons]

Nice. Fire is always near,it will never stop. Great analogy seeing as since we made fire all the greed and corruption followed.

[xSamilynnx]

really good i like it :D ps fire is awsome haha