Hate and Loathing

Im nothing but hate and loathing

Bits of burning flesh and kerosene

Burning with passion

For the life of the serene

I've ripped apart the rule books

Carved my hate into my skin

Torn down by those around me

Only to hide what's within

Im nothing if not angry

Clear as musch as confused

In all i have failed miserably

By my own mind in my own web

Spun through my own lies

Seperating me from myself

Ignoring my own cries

I needed help-

I wanted none

So now you see

What i've become

I'm the essence of disbelieving

While seeing it all plain

Drowned myself from the inside out

Because i had the power to make it rain.

Author's Note

I talk to much..

Reviews

[MrOldFashioned]

don't we all my dear? time does not escape us, we must escape it on our own.

[Reaper]

Very powerful. Definitively had my interest

[Evelyn Storm]

A very emotive poem. I could feel the searing heat of the hate and loathing. Then the calming cool of cathartic tears. Well written.

[ATG]

A very well written and interesting poem. The word choice was very effective at conveying the emotions behind this poem. Overall, a very good poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

"So now you see
What i've become
I'm the essence of disbelieving"
Better to go out fighting then fall in line with the cattle for the slaughter house. Your views are strong and wise. Better to see the world with real vision then to pretend all is Okay and wait for the bad ending. A strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Distant horizons]

Powerful and raw, emotion filled words jump from your write. I think if we were all truthful we would all recognise some of ourselves in this. great write.

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Very effective, if you broke it up a with a motif (chorus) it could be worked into lyrics. Either way, I like it.

[Edgar Allan Poe's Daugh..]

No, you don't talk too much. This is beautiful, and emotional. Good job. =D