My Style

Bipolar is my new clothing brand apparently.

Top of the line and none less.

With these sparkly earrings of sarcasm.

Shoes of heartlessness.

These strips of pain that hold me down are like hip new suspenders.

Pants of revenge and redemption wrap tightly on me.

I walk around with these scars and cigarette burns on my arms like they were the new Gucci purse.

I rock this look so well; I might as well be the model for the imperfect.

I walk as if nobody exists, but hey what’s new?

 

Author's Note

Not finished, probably edit it soon

Reviews

[icelandicblue]

You've created great visual analogies. I enjoyed your fashion show.

[Acer]

well written,

Pants of revenge and redemption wrap tightly on me.
I walk around with these scars and cigarette burns on my arms like they were the new Gucci purse.

I rock this look so well; I might as well be the model for the imperfect.
I walk as if nobody exists, but hey what’s new?

......

Nice wordings about "style", yeah, you' haven't yet finished, there's a need to add some more lines, but be careful that "Don't make it too long to read or too much short to breath :)

[Acer]

well written,

Pants of revenge and redemption wrap tightly on me.
I walk around with these scars and cigarette burns on my arms like they were the new Gucci purse.

I rock this look so well; I might as well be the model for the imperfect.
I walk as if nobody exists, but hey what’s new?

......

Nice wordings about "style", yeah, you' haven't yet finished, there's a need to add some more lines, but be careful that "Don't make it too long to read or too much short to breath :)

[KurKota]

Very effective analogies....I like it. You use creative phrasing very effectively....like those sparkly earrings of sarcasm...very creative... good writing I think.

[John]

Sarcasm.

[Rob Santana]

This is a clever piece I like it.