My Style

Bipolar is my new clothing brand apparently.

Top of the line and none less.

With these sparkly earrings of sarcasm.

Shoes of heartlessness.

These strips of pain that hold me down are like hip new suspenders.

Pants of revenge and redemption wrap tightly on me.

I walk around with these scars and cigarette burns on my arms like they were the new Gucci purse.

I rock this look so well; I might as well be the model for the imperfect.

I walk as if nobody exists, but hey what’s new?

 

Author's Note

Not finished, probably edit it soon

Reviews

[Joe_VILOT_]

yes the pain is clear the stylized accessories of a stoical attire inscribed with the sobering waking we all face no no cliches indeed the bitterness of their true the bitter-sweet seems to elude.

[TurtleClark]

we should share style tips :) i like this cant wait to read the finished product.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I read two of yours.... I'll leave a review here... this verse is raw and gets down right and to the point with the usage of words... First line gets the reader right away and the way you lay out the rest just keeps you in your seat... Bits of this and that... and the end line acts as a catch phrase...

[Sami Khalil]

A good read and write...:)

[Rahul]

Nice style, different but nice...so, ok, edit as soon as possible to read. But this;s enough to read and to enjoy but, if you want then you can edit more.
great job

[The Good Hurt]

Not a thrift store outfit.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i really like the metaphors you are working into this piece...

"strips of pain like hip new suspenders"

wow.

[zainul]

A talking model of imperfect on her ramp!
I watch the video and replay it again and again.
You have such a don't-care- yet- alluring disposition!
Wonderful write.
Got top grade :)

[DeCipher]

Is this what you want to be? Or is it just who you are for now?