Dating a Rock Star

 

You’ve got a voice that leaves me breathless

But with all these screaming girls that say they love you

What am I here for?

 

I mean to every breakup and makeup we had

It turned into a stupid song

That crazed fans memorized

 

Maybe we should fight more

So you have more greatest hits 

I mean that’s what the people want, right?

Reviews

[Aarontastic]

Cool poem. It's very simple and gets right to the point; there's not much imagery or anything, but the minimalistic style suits it. The tone is very spiteful and cynical XD Nice job.

[Beautiful_Nightmere]

I like this!(: But i think that is should talk more about it! Like maybe show us how it feels to be in those fights. What it feels like to be crushed that this girl feels like she's no one compared to all the fans.(: Good work tho(:

[eeoopig]

I love the ending to the poem :) Most songs tell a story, or an emotion. I also guess you were expressing how a girl would feel as the girlfriend of a rock star, and I think you have captured that well. There are the good times and the bad. Good job

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

This sounds more Taylor Swift style. I'm a guitarest and a song writer, and to be honest I really never wrote a song about loving someone (I listen to a lot of Pink Floyd). But nonetheless, there are some artists that get big because of useless love and break ups. Very good.

[afra]

wow i love this ....awesome

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Wow. Never thought about it quite like this. Excellent write

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem. The poem does tell a real story. Hurt and pain is the reason for song and ideas. Our experiences is the reason we can create. A good ending to the poem. Good to end a poem with a question. Thank you for the excellent poem.
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