Come back on a better day

Sometimes i wish i could fly away

 

and come back on a better day,

 

I would fly to heaven and sit on a cloud,

 

where i would watch over you all and sing out loud,

 

I would dance with the angels in the sky,

 

but don't think that this would mean goodbye,

 

because i would come back on a better day,

 

when all of my worries have gone away.

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems, what do you think of dialogue?

Reviews

[DrD]

What grammar problems???? The sentiment is all too familiar, to step back from life and return when all is healed, corrected or forgiven. The simplicity of this work almost hints of a spiritual innocence to the point of being naive but it still lures us to read it and to sympathize. I enjoyed this very much.

[Zoelouise]

Thank you for taking the time to review. I have read some of your work and thoroughly enjoyed doing so.I noticed on you're profile that you stated you give honest reviews, which is what we are all in need of. So thank you very much.