Out of the Blue

I was sailing on the vast sea.

The darkness frightened me.

Colds winds had frozen my soul.

Strong waves tossed and turned me.

I was in nowhere

alone…

 

I prayed to reach the land.

Land, God, give me land.

Give me something to hold onto.

I wished to touch Earth again

soon…

 

Days past,

weeks I’ve float

months came

until years,

still the same…

 

My sight can only perceive water.

Blue water raging with anger.

the skies lit, the thunder roared,

the clouds swirled and something fell,

something I couldn’t tell…

 

Then a midst the water,

you were there

The most beautiful creature

I’ve ever seen

warm…

 

I touched you if you’re real,

your heartbeat is like music

like rhythm in the sea

I’ve longed to hear so much

Finally…

 

You opened your eyes,

it was blue as the sea

Its stillness calmed me,

you brought me tranquility

I felt safe…

 

I have the sea now I’m not afraid anymore.

In the darkness you were my light.

In the freezing wind you were my warmth.

In the strong waves you were my land.

Only you…

 

Now I know what this journey is about,

no matter how the sea rocks and dazed me,

I thank God I never gave up .

I never let my boat sink into the darkness

cause you did came…

 

To put brilliance into my sea,

burst fireworks in my skies,

make waves music in my ears,

draw a smile on my face

and sparkles in my eyes…

 

 

 

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

I like how you highlighted some lines...Poem was sooo good...:)..................

[Fhlandrae]

.EmSOOOProudOFYou :)))
.I Love ur works . Especially this..
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[reflectingus]

Wow. Loved the turn in events, the way you accentuated the power of love, the power of trust, and how we can conquer even the tragedies of tragedies with someone by our sides. I did find some minor grammar errors, there was some confusion between past and present tense, proof read, and I'm sure you can fix it. Also "cause you did came" should be "cause you came". Nevertheless, this flowed brilliantly, loved reading.

[FelicityAllona]

am so speechless while reading this :)

nice poem :)

[Manpreet]

Beautiful piece! The flow is great it makes the reader fly with it. The end is promising. Altogether lovely piece!

[Maan]

Wonderful message you have conveyed through your this poem. I like it, you kept the grip of feelings from the start of the poem till the last word of it. Excellent Job! Keep up the good work. .

[Shay]

nicely done, each line following the next flows and ties it in with the central message well good job