Until now

Until now

A Screenplay by Zoe Kaufhold
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This is just part of an interview with a junior girl named Emily

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Interviewer: So, tell me how you knew her.
Emily: Before the incident, she always talked.
Emily: She was my happy go lucky best friend
Emily: She never ever missed a chance to make someone smile
Emily: After he... after he cut out her tongue everything changed
Emily: Today was the first day she's never said a word.

© 2016 Zoe Kaufhold


Author's Note

Zoe Kaufhold
Ignore grammar problems

Anything i could do to make it better?

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I enjoyed the suspense & raw power in this. A great start to something great, I'm sure. I always love stories with a strange or odd twist in them.

Posted 7 Years Ago


i like it :) And i agree with Jaime. You only have to put the name once , if they are continuing to speak.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I really like this idea, with a screenplay I think its better to only write "name:" when you're changing characters. But other than that I think it's great looking forward to reading more!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 20, 2016
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Tags: horror, plot twist

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Zoe Kaufhold
Zoe Kaufhold

Mason, OH



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