Elements of Love

Fire, Water, Earth and Wind
Fighting for my eternal love
But the question to me, is who’ll win
When each one has a frame unlike it’s kin.

Fire with his strong body,
Water with her bright smile,
Earth with her continuous embrace,
Wind with his wild eyes,
All leaving me with nothing but surprise.



Wind, Fire, Water and Earth
Expecting me to make a choice
How am I to measure their worth
When each had a different personality at birth

Wind with the spirit of a raging gale
Fire with the passion of a million suns
Water with a mind more vast than a sea
Earth with a heart big as a field
All making me unable to give any yield



Earth, Wind, Fire and Water
Begging me for a try
Why should I even attempt to bother
When each one acts as my spotter

Earth always there to give me strength
Wind always there to cheer me up
Fire always there to spike my senses
Water always there to support my choices
All making me analyze their voices.



Water, Earth, Wind and Fire
All pleading for my life
Which one am I to admire
If each one fills me with a special desire

Water making me want to feel
Earth making me want to love
Wind making me want to have fun
Fire making me want to mess around
In the end... they’ll always keep me dumbfound.

Author's Note

M'kay, as most of you know, I'm not much of a poem writer. Actually, this is my first one. But, this just kinda came out one day so I thought I would share it with you all =D

Reviews

[Bridget Murphy]

It's really good, it's a good read!!!:)

[Andrea Vargas]

This was fantastic, a different turn on love, using the elements as your basis! You should write poetry more often! I greatly enjoy your work (:

[Brittany W]

For your first poem this is fantastic, i loved it and you wrote it so well, keep up the good work, i'd like to see more from you.

[Ariene Ibana Venida]

=)

[EarthlyAneko]

nice. i like this. a lot. maybe its because it's kind of what my book i am writing is about? ^^'' but, really, i like it.

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[Lia]

For a first poem this is fantastic, it has good rhythm and nice imagery. Great job!