when you love

hope for loving

when you love
you feeling
when you love
your happy
feel this feeling to the end of life
many think you can do it
but when you love
every think change
hope come true
love somebady how you want
when you love
it's hard
life will help you
love is the best think in the life
your love only to me
when you love
it's like dream
when you love
it's your wish
many think changing
but never leave your love
never leave your love..


director by Aziza alisher

Reviews

[poetdoug]

"When you love it's like a dream". I love your words here and expressions of feelings when one falls in love. And then your important and dramatic ending wordings:"But never leave your love----
never leave your love." It's like you are even over emphasizing the importance of this most important fact of falling in love with your true love. Thanks for being my first follower Aziza. I hope we can keep in touch through our writing my friend. Thanks.

[songs and short stories]

thank you to i am happy to have friend who undrstant me :)

[poetdoug]

You are most welcome my friend. Keep writing!

[songs and short stories]

okay i will do my best :)