Love

This isn't your average love poem! a thought came to me: what would you say to love if it were a person? So my brain came up with this.

        Love


      Love, you are quite the con; you have left me to sing you this swan song.
     Choosing fight or flight, how can you say you’re kind and you’re just right?
     Love, you fiend, you cad, thanks to you, my sweet life has gone bad..
   
 Peel away from the guilt and pain, no matter how I want you again,
           Try to understand, why I recommend, a lonely---- life.

Love, you trickster, your sick! I fall deeply, almost to quick; in the end you tear out my heart, should have called it quits from the start.
  From the beginning you killed me, don’t get me wrong, I know what it could be, you call it life, fate, my words to you, I’m done, it is too late!

Author's Note

Please, tell me what you think, because love can sometimes be very nasty ;)

Reviews

[Worms]

yes it can,
amazing work here that is really good dialouge and a n ice undertone