I AM

As I lay me down to sleep, I know god watches as i weep.

I am a walking breathing tragedy

Badly Bruised By this reality

 An overlooked mis-fit in humanity

and on the cusp of enternal insanity

 I am wild heart chasing hopeless dreams

a vicious fire itching to be free

 a lonely traveler laced in mystery

 a tarnished rose with a lethal sting

A lover of peace in ages of war

with hidden demons in his stock and store

a nasty tale of forbidden lore

still waters run deep into this core

Caged between the Devil and the deep blue sea

I am the quiet lotus adrift endlessly

Leeched to my desires so desperately

Floating on these dreams quite frivolously

 I know misery and i know pain

 I fight this battle, though i've yet to wane

doomed to wonder this desolate plain

I am the tortured soul forever playing in the rain.

Reviews

[Pash]

Bravo! Eerie and pumped filled with sadness. My cup fo tea.

[Ghost writer]

I really really love that a lot. it rhymes really well yet it's also deep and true not like you just wrote it because the words rhyme which is awesome!

[Jermar Makins]

this is one Godly flow got to give u some props for that one

[Misha]

I love it. It made me open up

[nfyd]

This is great! So much depth and a really good flow as well!

[Mara]

Oh My! This is amazing, I love it!
i like how is all rhymes, i'm defiantly going to be reading this again
Great job!!

[M]

I couldn't stop reading till the end came so I started reading this amazing poem once more...... Keep it up U R a great and a prominent writter..

[devin.klose]

I don't often like poetry, but when I do, it's with an unwavering passion. This example is phenomenal. I love it. Keep Writing!

[Created to Write]

Oh, this poem is a way to but despair to words. Bravo. It is sad, but also with a little mystery. Great poem.

[Luna Stormbreaker]

That was beautiful. it describes my mood right now perfectly. I really loved this a lot.