Oi, Donny Boy

Meant to be heard, not read, but I couldn't get this guy out of my head, so I posted this thread.

I never noticed how I caught my thrill by playing nice to lure the kill

Till I found Donovan

I couldn't stop smilin'

A trick with coins and the butterflies make me look surprised as I gaze in his umber eyes

I prophesies- Oh, Donovan, I swear I saw the future there

*Magician's intrigue and a dubious grin, I'm all in

Cuz thinking of him is the hardest thing not to do

Under this veneer of a seriously silly girl a romanticist waits to cry,

"I have too much heart for one body to contain!  I seek a soul peculiar as I"

Oh, I saw a star in his chakra like a voltage through my brain

Encouraging me to be much bolder like him

Take nothing back

Let his virtues make up for those I lack

And vice versa 

Oi!  Donny boy!*

I never noticed how my vision lies when romanticized, like my hearts been hypnotized

Oh, Donovan, you make me feel like grovelin'*

We're at the pub and the brew is nice, but I spill my drink

Well, at least it breaks the ice

Oh, Donovan, infatuated, can't pretend

Your disappearing act is f*****g with my head

It seems to me that you'd prefer the words left unsaid

Well, I have come to realize that I am just a silly girl who's better off being alone

My vast idiosyncrasies, uncommon eccentricities, hold power that I simply can't hone

Oh, why?  

I shan't forget his chakra and its ember burning red

Speaking to me of love through energies and wavelengths of the mind

That I have finally come to find

Oh, Donovan, you are the magician 

Author's Note

This formatting is chaotic, I know.

Reviews

[Aurora Tigress]

I love it and its wording regardless of chaos in the format :)

[sithlordjp]

Chaotic format perhaps, but fascinating just the same! Strong original writing.