A Garden by the Sea

I’ll make a garden by the sea,

For you and me,

With plenty of flower plants,

Having a lone task- producing Arabian scents.

 

The sunflowers will bloom in ecstasy,

Welcoming you in the morn daily,

The roses shall never forget,

Scattering for you the natural bouquet.

 

Life mingled with joy,

Will surround your personality, coy,

The impatient air must dance,

With the flowers leaving no chance.

 

Poseidon might go green at each serene noon,

Since I’ll be holding you soon,

With the hand of mine,

Enjoying the painting divine.

 

The flowers might go extreme,

Getting you amid them,

Since your aroma shall surpass,

The fragrance that all the flowers amass.       

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Not sure on the Ecstasy part...


But it is truly a Lovely write Nice work.



I loved the first stanza's lines here quite lovely.


I’ll make a garden by the sea,

For you and me,

With plenty of flower plants,

Having a lone task- producing Arabian scents.



I love the Eastern countries they're very Breathtakingly
beautiful I love culture and it is quite beautiful where I am
at here in Northern Georgia USA :)


Thank you for sharing this lovely piece.

Take care. Benita

[Md. Ziaul Haque]

Thank you so much for the lovely words. :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're welcome.

[Lady Glitter]

Nice rhyming flow in this romantic verse. I like the phrase, "I'll make a garden by the sea..."

[Md. Ziaul Haque]

Thank you so much. :)

[Briana O'Connor]

Truly beautiful imagery and expression. Such fluid notions and sentiments. Very well penned. Thank you for sharing.

[Md. Ziaul Haque]

So nice of you. :)

[I Am Svetlana]

I really like the second stanza, that's probably my favorite. But also, I liked the vivid imagery you used in order to tell such a story. And how you mentioned Poseidon, I'm sure he'll be glad to be mentioned and remembered. You have a good way with words and storytelling!

[Md. Ziaul Haque]

Thank you so much. I appreciate your comment. :)

[Surya pradha]

liked it a lot. enjoyed your stanzas.

[Md. Ziaul Haque]

Thank you a lot. :)