Make Her Stay

Staring into deep...

imperceptibly deeper than I find myself 

anywhere else as you look at me in the eye.

Precociously desiring I carve my fingers to knowing

who you really are.

As if I had the answers to your questions of longing, 

embracing and heartwarming advances. 

I tell you to stay, stay like the stars at night or the 

sands in my toes, I won't stop till you stay.

Stay where I can feel you.

Stay when I can feel you.

Stay what I can love you.

Stay who I can be to you

For when I can feel you, not even the slightest raises or drops 

I fear of knowing you were there to slip away from. 

As I find your hand here a phantasmal entity begins to entail itself

in an apparition like no other. 

For where I can feel you even the heart and soul has me wrapped

where you want to go. 

Your heart and soul that shines so brilliantly I feel the way you feed 

me with your stargazing stare 

So stargazer look into my eye and find the fault I feel you closing in me

for I know it best but to look for you when you feel lost.

For what I can love you has me to degrees of comparing you to any other 

feeling I have of you...and that is endless. 

Of malice- I will call it hope

Of malcontent - I will call it goodwill

Of maleficence - I will call it blessing.

For what a feeling it is to love you like the constellations of what I 

draw at night!

For who I can be to you is but just an ordinary boy out in the park

looking for his ordinary girl on this ordinary experiment.

I can be the x, the y and the z in the formulaic of your own mind

but I tell you neither all three will be involved in any of our 

future endeavor and exploration of our life.

As I succumb to you, I want you to feed me of what your heart 

looks like! 

For a soul palette such as yours is one but too many to cherish

and immediately forget. 

As it is with your heart I long not of the peace of my love that I have 

of you but by the content of knowing your imperfections

were the one I was staring at in between that angelic smile you have.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"Stay where I can feel you.
Stay when I can feel you.
Stay what I can love you.
Stay who I can be to you

For when I can feel you, not even the slightest raises or drops
I fear of knowing you were there to slip away from.
As I find your hand here a phantasmal entity begins to entail itself
in an apparition like no other."
A splendid read and write...:)

[tuvi]

" Stay where I can feel you.
Stay when I can feel you.
Stay what I can love you.
Stay who I can be to you "

so famished for stay ..... just pours out very very nicely

"feeling I have of you...and that is endless.
Of malice- I will call it hope
Of malcontent - I will call it goodwill
Of maleficence - I will call it blessing.
For what a feeling it is to love you like the constellations of what I
draw at night! "

this stole away my heart .... I mean I am truly Head over Heels in love with these lines :D

[Zero_Edge88]

Well now thank you! Glad I could offer you of something to eat ;) :)

Heh, thank you Tuvi. :)

[tuvi]

Lolz .....

[Zero_Edge88]

You know it haha! I do however have some chocolate cheesecake if you want ;)

[tuvi]

yum ... chocolate cheesecake

[Zero_Edge88]

Only got a few bites left...and oh have you taken a look at that poem called "destination"?

[tuvi]

no let me have a look in a while ...little busy

[Zero_Edge88]

okay :)

[Zero_Edge88]

booo! :(

[K.S.78]

Stay who I can be with you...Love this! So sad but so good because it shows the yearning that so many have known for far to long this is like a plea for help and its beautiful!

[Zero_Edge88]

You're right it's sad but it is so good...there is yearning in this peace that makes you want to be with someone but you can't. It's the complexity we try to overcome. Few have succeeded whereas others have failed though! :( Thank you!

[chicagogirlonce]

You have expressed the helplessness of love well-the sad and sweet vulnerability of it.Thanks for sharing.

[Zero_Edge88]

One of the things I was looking for was that. The vulnerability and susceptibility of it just makes you feel so weak and powerless really. The sadness too is melted there. Oh what love it is when it's gone.

[chicagogirlonce]

So true,Zero.Hang in there-you will find her!