Nudity

Read at your discretion.

The last time I saw you,

I thought of you in my dream,

I found myself fondled by 

your small hands. 

So beautiful I fainted,

So nerve wracking I shuddered,

So contraband I pleaded,

So intoxicating I choked.

I count not the years of under wrapped

because there is no distance of how 

far you've come to touch my flesh 

and wrap its way around me. 

I discount the hates and the slaps

because I know they will keep coming. 

In waves and throes they will 

remind me you're an indication of my mistakes.

That however will never be the cause 

of why I must end my love for you.

There is no shame in loving a woman like you.

The only shame is hiding my feelings for you

and watching you wonder whether they are true

or not.

No amount will surmount the mountain of 

feelings that had counted its way in inch by inch.

You're the unlikely love that I fell for.

The best part about it, 

is that we're naked...

I can't say the same how long will I keep staring at you.

I can't stop shaking but I bet you know how to enjoy it.

I can't help but hear the feeling I have for you in every 

step of the way because I feel you are the one I enjoy

the most.

This is where it begins,

Your flesh against mine

Your insatiable lust of the rush over my insatiable

rush of what is lust.

Your intoxication that is the fluid I drink 

as a token of your affection.

Your lips that close so beautifully that I lisp 

to think that I could grasp, clasp and lapse into a 

sugary coat so densely sweet and beautiful to eat with.

This is the beginning, the sensation, and the climax.

Twirl your fingertips in me as the constellation I draw 

on your skin will be the connection where the universe

had us meet.

Swirl your lips once more as I kiss them so salacious 

that I may never find an antidote for that 

of your beauty you call your own.

Embrace your soul against mine once more 

as we levitate to plains and planes

where we are together.

So come for me once more, break no stride

and enlighten these feelings and shell of wisdom

into nirvana of our world alone.

Reviews

[K.S.78]

Amazing! I love your word selection. And again Mr Psychic, I had just finished reviewing another persons work and was telling them how much I love space,stars,universe metaphors so I swear you can read my mind! Remarkable writing! I really have no more words lol :)

[Zero_Edge88]

Hehe! Thank you, my old classmate from high school told me how I have this knack of picking the most mundane words in the dictionary and still turn it into something of this magnitude. They are beautiful, no matter how many times we describe it and create it. There's something about them that makes it so worth every line and stanza form it. I know you do you're just hiding them from me like those stars at night lol :P :)

[tuvi]

Hey ,

honestly i just randomly landed onto this page .... but I'm glad for that random thing that bought me here ! i absolutely loved the eclectic verbiage :)
you sent me into a trance where each word made a live footage :P
looking forward to have more such reads from you !

Tuvi