I Am Deadman Cometh

Close the windows, 

Bar the blinds,

Batten those hatches,

Are you ready?

Starvation has me sated all these years,

All that pestilence has me craving me for more,

My cup of blood has been overflowing of your tears,

as the salts in my body heal so efficiently 

with your anguish and lamentations I feel so fulfilled.

The seconds can't stop ticking any faster.

The minutes will not hinder my progress

as the hour is nigh 

I find your futility to be sweetening in my buds.

The aching hearts have stopped beating once more

for they are now the losers in my great winners hall of fame.

The raging hormones have coalesced in an orgy of 

decadence and impure temptations as they crave for more.

The unforgiving ones have longed for their echos

as they no longer fear the silence that has contained them.

For what it's worth, I saw it all coming,

I didn't need a date to set up all my appointments.

For retribution is a swift kick and once 

it is out there, you have become independent.

For no longer I am in the confines of my

demise, I am free again and this is what I feed upon the most.

I am deadman that cometh!

From the depths of your beckoning and treasonous voices,

I have come to serve no one but my own true purpose.

I am your no one's command for I unshackle you as 

I keep my life of my own.

I am the deadman!

I

AM 

THANOS!

Reviews

[chicagogirlonce]

Your writing sort of scares me,but I get the idea that wanting to shock is behind all of your writing.You write very well....I sense that you could be a great writer of gruesome murder and mayhem fiction.

[Zero_Edge88]

Why thank you! I find that very flattering. I really do but as of this moment I have written my first thriller book for now. The gruesome murder part will have to wait but the mayhem fiction though is within the confines of this thriller that I wrote! Thank you I look forward to more of your reviews :)

[chicagogirlonce]

That is great that you have written a book! I can't wait to read it.Your poems are so emotional and expressive that I feel could write in many genres--perhaps romantic fiction,even,as you seem to write a lot about love. I feel that you are wise beyond your years....

[Zero_Edge88]

Thank you, it will be an online release but I do hope to turn it into paperback for sure. Thank you. Love is a wonderful emotion right. Thank you again. :)