Under the Vermillion Sky

This is one of the first poems i ever wrote back in high school, must have been about ohhhhhh 5 years ago. funny story, i actually got suspended over writing this poem, no not over content but because i was a D Student in every class bar english where i

 

 

Under a vermillion sky

 

 

A variable open ocean of emotion

I care not to be part of

Hide myself

In a vermillion sky of variation

I wrap myself tightly

Again

And again

 

 

Here I’m safe

Sheathed away from the indomitable oppression

From your tenacious tendencies

Tranquilize my tender and torn soul

Again

And again

 

 

 

Reviews

[Tyler Bates]

This poem is awesome. Your extensive vocabulary is very impressive to me. You really dont see people using these kinds of words that often. It is refreshing to hear uncommon words. Great poem. ( Thanks for the review by the way)