Decending: Broken Beaten and Scarred Sonnet

Fear: Emotion that clouds mens judgement

These chains that have bounded me to hell
Now they will be the key to my salvation
From the bottom of Earth I fell
I am weary of this migration

 

Broken, beaten, and scarred
Broken from the demons I've fought
Beaten in front of the darkness I tried to aparred
Scarred by the figments I've sought

 

This emotion now clouds my mind
My hand shakes from the voices I hear
The hesitation of the rest I might find
These symptoms are best known as fear

 

But with this fears as my motivation
I will escape from my damnation
 

Author's Note

Be as hard as you want on this one ^_^

Reviews

[Aly~RaWRs]

like it.
really sad, so emo XD

[Aersh]

m not a hard critic... but i'll say that this sure was a brilliant piece. absolute wow!!!! especially the last 3 lines.
"These symptoms are best known as fear
But with this fears as my motivation
I will escape from my damnation"

wow!!!!