Moon and the Sun

A message is in the writing. read the whole thing then the bolded part

I am neither a heartless nor a soulless man

      my heart is an unfinished puzzle

      my soul is split like the sun and moon

Faith is that what gives me hope

      No faith means death to me

      But it seems that death is no more than another life

I do not want the caring light of the sun

      To give me light is to give me a sword

      Of which I will show the extent of nothingness under the moon

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems and spelling >_< sorry

Reviews

[Aersh]

hi... wow... really cool work man. and those bold parts were just great. lovely message. in fact it was quite a paradox as well as the actual poem was more on a pessimistic note but the bold parts were optimistic!!!

great job over all.

and by the way, you can review my works too. hope you will do so. wanna be friends????