Dying For You

Slow Ballad Song

Words are meaningless

Words are useless

Cause now I'm lost n' confused

Oh what can i do

My love you've won

If this was your intent

Let's let love die

As I breathe in this lie

There I go again

Falling helplessly for you

Been dying..here..without..your love

I've been trying...o' though with little hope

Crying..then dining..alone all choked up

Without you I'm lost..n' dying for you

Your picture brings a blow

Potent n' mortal

As I lay across the unbridled-sands

I question belief which questions love

These questions in dour

Oh what can i do

Drowning fast within you

Been dying..here..without..your love

I've been trying...o' though with little hope

Crying..then dining..alone all choked up

Without you I'm lost..n' dying for you

(solo)

Oh you know you do that thing to me

I'm down on my knees begging please

Been dying..here..without..your love

I've been trying...o' though with little hope

Crying..then dining..alone all choked up

Without you I'm lost..n' dying for-

you........you.......you..........

you........you.......you..........

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

very lyrical and definitely pulls at the heart. Well penned.

[Apathy To Empathy]

Enjoyable write.

[Ladysue]

it does read just like a song..good work...

[Closed Account]

nice work.

[*~Firecracker~*]

This speaks my recent thoughts clearly. Truly amazing. :) Great job!

[Zeo Writer]

thanks everyone for the great words :)

[William Maisonave]

must sound amazing

[Janice Ann]

I love songs like this. As a singer song writer I see it has wonderful possibility. Great work.

[Sami Liam]

Awes I love it :) It's a nice song, and I wants to hear it! Ha ha, I love love-sad songs. Many people can relate to them. I find myself staring at the screen taking in the song. I love it. :)

Sami

[Arabdha]

o the pathos that you poem evokes !! riveting and compelling..can relate to it..brilliant !!