A Place Without You

A slow song

A found another reason

To live the life that god had made for me

Now you say that I forgot you

Like I cast you aside with any care

If only you see the truth

The reason is just to fills those empty holes

The ones there left by you

Slivered deep within my soul

Please sent me away from here

To a place where all scars are healed

A place where I can start over new

A place without you

 

These seasons of clarify

Are lost in all ferocity

Now there’s nothing for me to do

But sit here and cry away each and every tear

Until my pain has numbed away

I need a reason to stay

Please sent me away from here

To a place where all scars are healed

A place where I can start over new

A place without you

A place without you...

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Musical Break

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The candle of hope is still burning

Just to keep the warmth left within my heart

But there you go destroying all my hopes and dreams

And now I’m down and all alone

A cloud appears and washes away my tears

Please sent me away from here

To a place where all scars are healed

A place where I can start over new

A place without you

A place without you

A place without you...

A found another reason

Reviews

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Well written sentiments I can truly and many others likely can relate to. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha

[Zarathustra]

this is one of those 'damn, I wish I wrote this' moments...I really enjoyed reading this over and over and singing the lines in my head. The best part about your works is being about to feel every word and relate to the emotion that comes with reading them.

Great read :)

[TL Boehm]

Well penned. there is a sadness to this piece that is unmistakable but I also found it affirming - in the sense that there is a resolve to move forward. There is a hope. Its not a hopeless piece at all.

[Ladysue]

oh this is a sad, but so beautifully written...Very heartfelt and deep emotion...wonderfully done...

[EmpressPoetess]

Oh...so bittersweet! I love how you made this really deep with emotion, longing and pain, but at the end there is determination and hope. Awesome song!

[Zeo Writer]

yeah that what i meant ;)

[Amethy]

the only problem I see in here is the fourth line says, "Like a cast you aside with any care" don't you mean like I cast you aside with any care?