Devil's Luck

rock song

through the fires comes a lair with dragons fire
who seeks corruption an assumption that never wanes
to seize control of souls as truth be told
is the signs of crimes and battle chimes
here comes the pain...
hold on your pride...

cause the devil's got a bone to pick
and you better watch your back before the fight insists
cause the devil's luck a mighty b***h
and you don't wanna try messing with it
cause the devil's streak not gonna give
and you better play unfair if you wanna live
cause the devil's luck a mighty b***h
and you don't wanna try f*****g messing with it
come on

Now the days once told began to unravel
peer the times beast dines on lambs of mine
sword of stone emerges breath with courage
wield it strong and long the lairs head begone
victory at least...
A new fire reemerges...

cause the devil's got a bone to pick
and you better watch your back before the fight insists
cause the devil's luck a mighty b***h
and you don't wanna try messing with it
cause the devil's streak not gonna give
and you better play unfair if you wanna live
cause the devil's luck a mighty b***h
and you don't wanna try f*****g messing with it
come on

resurrection won the beast, second battle begins
his wrath is fast and unending, blasted in bliss
heart of gold struck him down counted him out
light returned souls return, heroes luck finally returned
...the tale relearned...

(solo)

cause the devil's got a bone to pick
and you better watch your back before the fight insists
cause the devil's luck a mighty b***h
and you don't wanna try messing with it
cause the devil's streak not gonna give
and you better play unfair if you wanna live
cause the devil's luck a mighty b***h
and you don't wanna try f*****g messing with it
come on

Reviews

[Spit_and_Prayers]

An interesting poem. My only suggestion would be to either refrain from repeating the "cause the devil's got a bone to pick..." stanzas or reduce their size. They overshadow the skill of the other stanzas in parts.