Breaking Point of Uncertainly

Breaking Point of Uncertainly

A Poem by Zeo Writer
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acoustic rock song

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as walls close around us
we given up on chance
as fates takes us away now
to worlds ill imagined...
but many lives are forfeit
it is what it is
time is pending n' space is amending
playing the roulette of life
casting plea...don't let it be...


breaking down the walls

breaking all that be
breaking shards n' breaking bars
breaking pacts of deceit
breaking of unbound-less laws

breaking minds that speak

breaking of unbound-less laws
breaking point of uncertainty



mighty lords are failing
their wonders thrusting aside
well mela lle but c'est la vie
passing on into the night
yet is it right...should we fight...

breaking down the walls
breaking all that be
breaking shards n' breaking bars
breaking pacts of deceit
breaking of unbound-less laws

breaking minds that speak

breaking of unbound-less laws
breaking point of uncertainty


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musical break

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a wearing shift has come
its missiles gunning the drove
hits and miss karma drawing to close
asses smoking choking the throw
it's mercy's time...now let it shine...


breaking down the walls
breaking all that be
breaking shards n' breaking bars
breaking pacts of deceit
breaking of unbound-less laws

breaking minds that speak

breaking of unbound-less laws
breaking point of uncertainty

© 2011 Zeo Writer


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Offbeat, interesting lyric.

You have this posted as a recording anywhere online?



Posted 14 Years Ago


I have a feeling that this is even better with everything put together! My favorite line would have to 'Breaking point of uncertainty'.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wonderful song here.
you seem like a very talented lyricist based on this and your other works, and I am thankful to be able to read this and more

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love the percussive sound this has as I read it. Its very much like a chant. Well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


another great song!! I wish I can hear the whole thing put
together,,, very good!!!


Posted 14 Years Ago



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