We Can Start Again

You left, when I wanted you the most

when, you were my only hope

when, you were the one I counted upon

when, you were the only person I wanted to hold on

I don't blame things on you

because I was at fault too

our fate led to incidents

our destiny brought us back

Whatever happened, happened for a reason

to push us from past to present

I agree, we are completely insane

but, perhaps! we can start again

Shattered souls, bleeding eyes

pangs of pain, heart that aches

alone we have had suffice

Let's get back and love all over again

Together its bliss!

you know I am right

you are the only addiction I have

your love is my pride

Let's start afresh

right from the first time we met

discovering the other side of the coin once more

falling for each other all the more..

Author's Note

thank you for reading this one! :)

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"Shattered souls, bleeding eyes
pangs of pain, heart that aches
alone we have had suffice
Let's get back and love all over again

Together its bliss!
you know I am right
you are the only addiction I have
your love is my pride"
I do like this write kind sir for it is true and emotive...Thank you for sharing your romance to him...:)
Sorry : typo

[Zelle]

whom did u say this for? "Thank you for sharing your romance to her...:)" :P

[Zelle]

thank u for reading and reviewing it anyway! :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure. You are welcome...:)

[Leslie Philibert]

An astute, considered poem, full of wisdom.

[Zelle]

thank you so much! :)

[Frieda P]

I love 'I agree, we are completely insane", LOVE is a form of insanity no? Good one, just have your eyes open when you take the plunge for the second time!

[Zelle]

yes love is completely wacky! :D I will do what you said! thank u so much! :)

[Cassie]

Hi Zelle, Thank you for the read request, Sorry i was not able to review earlier, am now back.
Loved reading this poem to the end of it and I relate with it so much. This is so nice. Keep them coming.

[Zelle]

thank u very much for your kind words Cassie! :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Zelle, Wonderful notes :)
Loved this poem and this reminds me more about my past when we use to sway and then forget
It reminds me many old memories which i left behind and we as human tend to forget.

Thank you so much for this wonderful share :)

Best Lines :

Together its bliss!
you know I am right
you are the only addiction I have
your love is my pride

Cheers!
Singh :)

[Zelle]

thank u so very much Mr. singh! :)
how is the little bundle of joy doing?

[Vikrantsingh]

She's awesome, now a days she's more and active and naughtily :D
We are enjoying it ;)

Thank you so much :)
- Singh :)

[Zelle]

she will get naughtier with each passing day and will keep u on your toes! :)
keep enjoying it! :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you dear :) I'm so happy ;)

- Singh :)

P.S: Thank you so much for your wishes :) on my poem :)

[Zelle]

the pleasure is all mine! :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks for your kindness Zelle