We Can Start Again

You left, when I wanted you the most

when, you were my only hope

when, you were the one I counted upon

when, you were the only person I wanted to hold on

I don't blame things on you

because I was at fault too

our fate led to incidents

our destiny brought us back

Whatever happened, happened for a reason

to push us from past to present

I agree, we are completely insane

but, perhaps! we can start again

Shattered souls, bleeding eyes

pangs of pain, heart that aches

alone we have had suffice

Let's get back and love all over again

Together its bliss!

you know I am right

you are the only addiction I have

your love is my pride

Let's start afresh

right from the first time we met

discovering the other side of the coin once more

falling for each other all the more..

Author's Note

thank you for reading this one! :)

Reviews

[Mary Christabel George]

To miss someone, to realise how important they are for you, to expect things to start all over again is to be in a totally different world. I just wish that both of them are on the same page & feel the same. If two lovers are so much into each other I want all the energies of the universe to unite them & keep the united forever. Very touching Poem dear!

[Mizo4]

Nice write. Lovely poem. I enjoyed reading it :)

[Sibt-e-Hussain]

I really lived your this stanza - true and heart aching reality, I truly understand the feelings; you have penned the dark side so simply but with a different and difficult approach indeed.

Shattered souls, bleeding eyes
pangs of pain, heart that aches
alone we have had suffice
Let's get back and love all over again

[Laura Harrison]

An emotional poem filled with hope and longing. It's an awful feeling when you lose someone you love

[sivan]

nice piece i have one similar i'm about to upload you should read it...

[Ravyne Hawke]

You did a good job showing the pain of losing the one you love, the need and desire to have that person back. I wanted to know what caused the break-up and what makes the protagonist think that they can patch things up and begin again.. good job here.

[Flutterby aish]

Wow.....a really beautiful one....."discovering the other side of the coin once more
falling for each other all the more"........this one i really fell for!!! A great write! Thanxs for sharing!

[BL]

Falling in and out of love can be the most pleasurable and sweet

[Ency Bearis]

Emotive thoughts well expressed about relationship. Great piece.

[Barbara Walker]

This poem made me say, "Whoa!" Too close to home! If this is true, I wish you much happiness and hope you get your second chance. Your words convey your intent very well.