Forget Me Never
A Poem by
Zeldablue
Sometimes in life...
I am
In fact
the most perfect
optical illusion
that has ever existed.
I am stared at
but not noticed.
I am difficult
to figure out
And almost always
given up on.
I am seen
by very few
and seen through
by most.
I am a twisted
entanglement of color
screaming in silence.
I am a frustrating
piece of beauty.
But
if you can solve me,
I am the purest form
of love that you
will ever know.
© 2017 Zeldablue
Reviews
‘I am seen
by very few
and seen through
by most.’
Indeed a good work. I like the above lines especially. Keep writing. 😊
Posted 7 Years Ago
its really relatable to me. i really loved this poem, especially the ending! just beautiful.
Posted 7 Years Ago
its really relatable to me. i really loved this poem, especially the ending! just beautiful.
7 Years Ago
Thank you so much!
7 Years Ago
No problem!! Keep writing.😊
This is absolutely amazing!
I am
In fact
the most perfect
optical illusion
that has ever existed.
I loved these lines and I copied them. And then I read on and the rest of the lines that followed were equally amazing too. :) I love the paradoxes you've presented and the way you've selected your positive points over the negative ones. Very well done. Brilliant word play! :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
This is absolutely amazing!
I am
In fact
the most perfect
optical illusion
that has ever existed.
I loved these lines and I copied them. And then I read on and the rest of the lines that followed were equally amazing too. :) I love the paradoxes you've presented and the way you've selected your positive points over the negative ones. Very well done. Brilliant word play! :)
7 Years Ago
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Added on April 2, 2017
Last Updated on April 4, 2017
Tags:
True Emotion
Author
Zeldablue
About
When she is quiet
There is a reason.
She is sorting through
All the chaos in
Her head...
And all the madness
In her heart.
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