Beautiful

And in this life

she discovered such

incredible beauty

in the world.

In between the

once upon a times

and

happily ever afters,

she shared her dreams

with the moon

and

her smile with the sun.

And when she loved

it was forever

and when she cried

she learned to dance

in the puddles

because in the end

she discovered the most

beautiful thing of all.

Herself.

Reviews

[Christy the Poetic Hear..]

Such an amazing writing!!! It is wonderfully well-written and the message behind it is powerful!!! No doubt that it was awarded well-written. Congratulations!!!!!

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

loved cherished every single word and line
love it
i agree this should be shared to women and men around the world
thanks for entry into my comp

[Zeldablue]

Thank you So much!

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

you are welcome

[ElizaB]

Hey,

Thank you for entering your piece.

I like the fact that it is short yet conveys such an important message that I feel should be globally available, as in life we never really love ourselves, although we try to it will remain a struggle.

Thanks again!

[brinda]

Its simple.Its unapologetic. Its beautiful

[Zeldablue]

Thank you very much!

[David R Gonzalez]

This poem of self acceptance its the nail on the head. it was put into simple yet beautiful words.

[Aishwarya Prem]

The content s good..it would be better if u could consruct it properly and add more lines to the poem..good job!!

[Katelyn Kennedy]

This is so beautiful and I want it posted everywhere for every girl to see. Lots of people don't realize their importance and how spectacular they are but this made me smile myself. I love this!