Where were you?

Where were you?

A Poem by Zeik
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I have a habit of feeling alone, and this is a product of that.

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Where were you?
When I was alone.
When I didn't even have "the few"
I should have known..

Known that you would betray
This sense of trust.
Known that you wouldn't stay
And make this all a bust.

I was never supposed to be scared,
never alone.
The fact you never cared
You can never atone.

© 2012 Zeik


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Rhyme scheme is basic but it works for the simple poem nice job

Posted 12 Years Ago


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~ excellent work... sadly, i've known many people who don't care... and it really hurts... you expressed the pain of interacting with such people really well... thank you for this post...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Zeik

12 Years Ago

I have experienced this pain far too much. Thank you for taking the time to read my writing.
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12 Years Ago

~ me too... ~ you're very welcome...

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Tags: Alone, scared, lonely

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Zeik
Zeik

Jackson, MI



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