A Tale Of Perfect Love

Love is a many splendid thing with compromise and fear. There are many things one can do to make love wonderful too.

If you wish to find the perfect love keep this in mind:

Be sweet like honey, understanding... and kind.

If things get rough and you can’t decide,

you must look in her eyes and compromise.

And if you can compromise? Trust will grow.

And as your trust grow you will trust her so.

And if you let your heart swell and emotions grow,

then the love you feel will reflect and glow!

If you want to show your love, you must support, my friend...

Not just with money... but with love (so true) until the end.

Respect her decisions (even if she is wrong) and she will respect yours.

And be patient and gentle with her emotions and it will open doors.

And if the doors close open up your heart and forgive her

Be happy when you are around her

and fun when you are with her

and have modesty and show her

that she is better than you.

But do not lose the confidence and love yourself too.

And once you do all this and are willing to talk as well...

You will be the perfect love and your hearts will swell.

Author's Note

This one is old. Is there any room for improvement that is apparent?

Reviews

[SoulWriter]

I like it!
This is a really good work.
I think you found the right words to describe those feelings

[Eleanor]

A bit of editing could make this better. Otherwise I really liked it :)
All the points you mentioned are really important in love!
You expressed everything really smoothly.