My Inner Demons

My inner demons are coming free,

Breaking their bounds; Breaking my strength.

Day by Day a little more, they grow so quickly.

Invisible to the eye, hiding in my mind.

Eating me alive.

Reviews

[Pete]

very well said. honest and relatable. most of us wrestle with something within ... :)

[Zee Norton-Williams]

Thank you

[Chris]

And who IS the person you are becoming? And what do you find on your paths?

[Zee Norton-Williams]

what do you mean?

[Chris]

I am asking you what you see yourself becoming - the full grown person... and what do you expect to find as you continue through your life.

[Zee Norton-Williams]

It's not really that kind of poem it's about mental illness

[Chris]

I took the poem as a personal view toward yourself - as the person you are becoming, the stresses faced and your dealing - not as a mental illness depiction ...sorry.

[Zee Norton-Williams]

No, don't be sorry my writings are open to interpretation. feel free to read more and let me know your view on them :)