Dear Son,

Dear Son,

A Poem by Zayir
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The pain of a miscarriage

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Dear son,

I constantly think about the man you could have been
Some nights I can't sleep cause I wonder what our life could have been 
Many nights I stay up and just cry because I miss you 
I have dreams where you're here and everything is perfectly fine
I won't ever to be able to get over you 
But maybe you won't be on my mind in due time
When I heard that I lost you I was never the same 
Your life itself was a blessing
First traumatic experience and it makes me feel insane 
You changed my ways and that's a blessing 
I can just imagine this picture,
Dark skin brown eyes sweet smile with a bright future
Everyone would be so happy if you were here 
You would have brought your mom and I together 
Even though you aren't here,
You'll always be in my heart forever

Love,
Dad

© 2018 Zayir


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Deeply moved to read this. You poured your emotions really well.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A life that was a blessing in itself, however fleeting and brief it was. Zayir, your words tell me that a journey can be momentous yet love is eternal. I could feel with you, reflect on his life with you!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Zayir

6 Years Ago

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Your pain is well articulated. Excellent work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Zayir

6 Years Ago

Thank You!
Much love
You often read about the pain a mother has on losing a child through miscarriage, but this is the first time I have read about it from the perspective of a Dad. You did this well and conveyed real emotion. It got through to this reader.

Well done

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


Zayir

6 Years Ago

Definitely had a hard time writing this. Thank you so much for the review I really appreciate it
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beautifully written loved it

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Zayir

6 Years Ago

Thank you!
Much Love

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Added on June 25, 2018
Last Updated on June 25, 2018
Tags: Miscarriage, Pain, Loss, Parents, Mother, Father, Son, Family, Hurt

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Zayir
Zayir

Fresno, CA



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