Vows

Vows

A Poem by Marion Finnerty

Hands brushed against

Tangible click of metal on metal

Wedding bands

Thin band of gold

Wide engraved silver

A smile

A blush

      Callused hand whispering across silken

      Static attraction

      No real beginning or end

      Simply time spent together at work

      Maybe a little too much enjoyed

 

© 2010 Marion Finnerty


Author's Note

Marion Finnerty
I was sitting in a meeting and there was a charge between a couple colleagues that peaked for a moment. I've seen office crushes before but what stood out for me this time were the wedding bands. :)

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Wow this one just made me feel all giddy and romantic.
Nothing better than chasing something seemingly out of reach.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully written and expressed poetic view of your thoughts
truly an interesting subject, on the many occurrences in the work place
I love the flow WOW
your writing its truly unique

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is nicely said. Interesting how those office crushes work out isn't it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 28, 2010
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Marion Finnerty
Marion Finnerty

Canada



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