"On and On"

Short thought; heard a conversation where one person was talking about a near-death experience and how they aren't going to quit at life.

I lived,

But not to be the

                                                                                                         man

who knew the

World

was searching                                                                       on and on.

Instead to be the                                                                       man

                                   who searches           

on and on.

Reviews

[Adreamer's Bluejay]

I like this. It's an honest write with an interesting style that I believe most people overlook or forget about. The word choice is extremely basic but somehow it really fit well here, most writers can't get away with something like that so easily.

well penned.