"Ten Years Today"

It's ten years today.

At least it would have been.

I don't understand half the things

               you've said:

You need to work on yourself.

     You're not in the mental state to-

Regardless.

     I've dreamt dreams with enough plot to

          make my head spin and heart ache for

the girl you used to be.

I thought thoughts so sweet under the cover of darkness only to

     find

that nothing had happened.

           Nothing had changed.

And in the course of a night...

It seemed to me ten years...

My hopes were dashed once more.

It seems to me years since last I knew you.

Reviews

[Adreamer's Bluejay]

I am truly surprised that there are no comments on this piece yet. It is well written and even if it is as personal as it feels there is still an underlying situation so many people can or should be able to relate to at one point in their life or another. I especially enjoyed your choice of layout, interesting.

Keep up the amazing works, I look forward to reading more :)