Back in the Ashes

She walks home.

 

"When you walk away you don't hear me say please, oh baby. Don't go."

 

I as a stone define Williams-Beuren syndrome.

 

"In you and I there is a new land."

 

I crawled home from a Rose with an "I love you".

 

"Regardless of warnings the future doesn't scare me at all."

 

I named you Porcelain yet lacked the vigor to say simply adieu.

 

"My hearts a battleground."

 

I will never be honest.

 

Forgive me.

Reviews

[Jackson Lai]

Great poem...

[DearSweetAgony]

This is really great!
I LOVE this last stanza.
I ADORE the simplicity of this write.
You packed a whole lot of feeling into this brilliant write!
Great Job!
I enjoyed reading!

[Paul B. Spence]

Interesting.

Good imagery.

I really liked the middle part about warnings and the future.

[Raindrop]

Very unique. I read it three times... :))) It's amazing!

[.:Arianna:.]

Woah...this was truly,deeply beautiful,an amazing write! I really loved it!

[Shiningwolf]

My heart felt a lot in this one. I like it.

[sentimental~ galore]

I named you porcelain yet lacked the vigor to say simply adieu....i like that line. Not only because my favorite word is porcelain, but its really beautiful. In fact your whole poem was short but expressive. Interesting method of writing.

[Hayley]

Wow, I love this! It says just enough to keep you thinking and is pieced together very nicely to incorporate the different moods.