Porcelain

It was in the Summer I loved you.
It was the days of sun so yellow and skies so blue.
It was those days you fell to the north with the bruises on your face.
It was those days I lost something I can't replace.
Powerless in my hand to save you.
I prayed to God, "rescue you."
I'm gone so far away all the time.
There nothing I could do.
But I love your heart like you love mine.
You were my scarred angel with tears streaming down your face.
We'd both lost something we could never replace.
You said you'd never let me drown.
You'd pick me up and place feet on solid ground.
When the pain struck me, and scarred my face.
I'd lost something I just can't replace.
And I promised no matter how much the tug and pull came about I'd never raise my voice to shout it out to you.
Irregardless of what you do.

Porcelain love I swear I'll be there for you.

Reviews

[Jasmine]

the fragility is expressed well... i love the words "you fell to the north with the bruises on your face" best line of the poem.

[alexandria.]

like a song.

[Mica]

I feel like I'm just repeating what everyone else is saying about this but this really is an incredibly beautiful poem! The emotion you wove into your words is quite breathtaking, as are the words themselves. Very good job!

[Angela]

You call her porcelain, but I can't fail but think the heart of the writer is just as fragile? Beautiful. Your writings evoke strong feelings. Please keep at it

[sentimental~ galore]

this is really beautiful....porcelain is one of my favorite words...lol. Anyways really good detail, and imagery! =]

[♍ Kirstin ♎]

I love this poem, it somewhat reminds me of a song written by a local band in my area..... it's an awesome song. Good write.

[morningstar]

I love this poem because it's very creative and I felt the emotion behind this, nice work!

[.]

very song like. lovely title

[Tarik]

beautiful expression of pure emotionm...you longed for porcelain love and here you found it.

[DVampire]

this is good. you write well ^,..,^