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A Poem by Faye
This is family life.
I thought it was mine
I thought it was Holly's
I thought it was Dana's
I thought it was Bobba's
I thought it was lucy's
I thought it was Dad's
Ithought it was Mum's
I think it's everyone's.
That's sharing for you.
© 2010 Faye
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Excellent piece of reflections...subtle...sublime and rich in simple note.
Truly admirable.
Regards,
Posted 14 Years Ago
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This is a nice poem, I like how you put it togather.
Posted 14 Years Ago
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I like it, the way the words punch out at you. And i like the repetition. ^^
Posted 14 Years Ago
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Nice and punchy--brought a smile to my face!
Posted 14 Years Ago
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Added on July 8, 2010
Last Updated on July 8, 2010
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FayeLincolnshire, United Kingdom
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