Little glow.

Just think of frosted drops on lilac petals.

There's a garden not far from here,

just a few steps away.

This is a peaceful place,

no one goes here.

Just me.

 

It is always a night filled with serenity,

with those lilac flowers.

A sweet melody of water and midnight

The grass is deep dark green,

whispering in the wind.

 

This place is my sanctuary,

when i need.

This is a peaceful place,

no one goes here.

Just me.

 

I like it very much but i cannot name it.

A place that won't come,

if i try to grasp at it.

It is an ageless place that will never change.

 

This place is where i go to each night,

as rest my weary head.

I clase my eyes

and there it is.

 

This is a peaceful place,

no one goes here.

Just me.

Reviews

[Arctic Fox]

Yes I agree, very calming, almost like a lullaby

[r]

This is very pretty, and I love the repetition. It's a calming poem, and I love it!

[Y.Badr El Din]

oooh, I like!

[Warick Ten Bohmer]

Powerful piece of poetry. The repetition isn't actually annoying, sometimes it can really get out of hand but I believe this had just the right amount.

Just wish I had a place like that, one that existed in reality and not just inside my head. Not that I got anything like that inside mine.

[Bridget Mcmaken]

Awesome poem!

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