Mindless Chatter

Mindless Chatter

A Poem by Zane
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A poem about Love :)

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Walking down the street
Just us, hand in hand.
I can feel your leg brushing against mine
This moment couldn't be any more perfect.

 

 

Then, you open your mouth,
And the romance is.
Its run ou the door,
attempting to flee your extraneous blabber.

 

 

I can't help but laugh,
As a sad, childish pout surfaces.
"You're so cute!", I hear myself cry out.
The air is filled with peals of laughter.

 

 

We fall into a fit of tickles and giggles,
Tripping and swaying into people as we stroll.
 I look back, to merely seconds before,
And silently think, "This is enough."

© 2011 Zane


Author's Note

Zane
I wrote this as a response to my boyfriend's nagging. Apparently, I don't write happy poetry. So there!!! <3

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It's very cute! I loved it! Extremely creative and fun! =]

Posted 13 Years Ago


so cute
loved it
great write
chillzxxx

Posted 13 Years Ago


loved. it. very well written and absolutly adorable. awesome(:

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is so cute! A very poem. I love the line about the sad, childish pout. I can just picture this interaction.
A light fun poem!!
Great write!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 11, 2011
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Changed the name from "Snuffle" to "Zane" :D SO, I guess I go by Zane. I'm a boy who's been through some pretty...interesting things. I love writing. I love knowing I can make myself anything I w.. more..

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