Love

Love

A Poem by Zane

If I hugged you,
would you never let go?

If I kissed you,
would you cherish that moment?

If I reached for your hand,
would you take mine gently?

If I needed a shoulder,
would you let me cry on yours?

If I needed to talk,
would you really listen?

If I needed to scream,
would you do it with me?

If I needed to go,
would you come with me?

If I fell for you,
would you catch me?
or just let me hit the pavement




© 2010 Zane


Author's Note

Zane
I feel like this is really just, plain. ANy suggestions?

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Disagree, there is nothing plain at all about this! Quite the opposite, a unique love poem.
I found this poem to have incredible tenderness. Mostly the idea of doing everything together, not alone.
Your poems have an individual style to them that is very enjoyable to read. Great flow, good imagery, etc. Basically--- you write well :)
A lovely poem,



Posted 14 Years Ago


Thank you. I feel like too many people have love poems that rhyme..

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like this poem a whole lot. Though i think it would be much stronger if it rhymed. Besides that Its Awesome

Posted 14 Years Ago



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