Fin

I’m tired of the backhanded lies

That spill from your mouth

Just spare me all this pain

And just end it already

I’m done trying to keep this friendship going

Especially since you never seem to want to keep it

I’m tired of your deceptions

You can say you “love” your new girlfriend all you want

Just remember that when you “love” someone you don’t lie to them

I already know that lying, because you did that lie with me

And made me promise to keep the lie going to

Cause you know that I can’t betray you.

Reviews

[Calypso]

So powerful

[Ruth]

Harsh and heartfelt.....needed at times! Powerful love xx

[Satchmo's Gal]

short bitter and to the point

[Deviant Works]

Ooooo... Painful words... The ending to this piece absolutely drove it home. It is unimaginable some of the things people will withstand simply because they cannot betray someone they have cared for. Pure and utter deception, nothing less of tacking a knife in the back each time they have to stab another in the back. "Just end it already"... Four words that I am sure many have felt, right when they have been pushed around enough, can't stand another moment of pain. Great piece!

[KAREN]

Great show of emotions in this poem, well written!

[Nicole]

i could feel the intensity of the hate and recognized the hate i had towards some people in my life

[Misty Blue Eyes]

wow , right away i felt the pain, the anger towards some one. very good

[Coyote Poetry]

A strong poem. Open the door to many questions. I like the direct and honest emotion of the poem. Sometime better to be alone then to stand with liars. A interesting ending to the poem. A very good poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Poetic Beauty]

the idea for this poem is a good one. I think most of us have experienced some form of this treachery in our lives. I know I have. If the title is the person's name you might want to change it. Just a suggestion. Sometimes people are put off by slam poems that use people names. Other than that I think this gets your thought through clearly.

[felioness]

a very insightful write many have echoed loves lost