A journey like no other

A journey like no other

A Poem by Cats Eye

I would walk through the sands of time

Just to see that face of yours again

To hear the voice that brings a shiver upon my skin

To feel the gentle caressing of those calloused hands

I would walk with the sun and the moon

If only I can see that handsome face once again

To hear that musical voice

To intertwine my hand with yours

This journey I would make for you

For you will always be my love.

© 2011 Cats Eye


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aww very sweet hun

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aww, this is really sweet. It's wonderful you've found someone who is worth the journey. :3 Not many people can say that much.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful, felt the love she has in this poem! The flow was excellent!

Posted 13 Years Ago


beautiful. it was soft and somber yet very emotional.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Quiet and heart felt. You truely love this person. Beautiful poem. Keep up the great work. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


awwwww I love love love romance this is amazing

Posted 13 Years Ago


A very sweet poem. Very nice, very well done. It was short, too. I like that(: Short, yet to the point. A beautiful piece!

Posted 13 Years Ago


The intertwine is great, makes it feel more like souls not just hands. The callused hands give that little subtle hint of a man's man but also show a tender kiss because of its a musical voice.

Excellent work

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a great poem! Nice tribute!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like it (:

Posted 13 Years Ago



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