A journey like no other

I would walk through the sands of time

Just to see that face of yours again

To hear the voice that brings a shiver upon my skin

To feel the gentle caressing of those calloused hands

I would walk with the sun and the moon

If only I can see that handsome face once again

To hear that musical voice

To intertwine my hand with yours

This journey I would make for you

For you will always be my love.

Reviews

[A Lost Man Found]

"the gentle caressing of those calloused hands". reminds me of a good line from a country song. i love it!

[Truman S. Booth]

I loved the line "the gentle caressing of those calloused hands". A brilliant mix if two conflicting adjectives—gentle and calloused—to show that he is a real man: hard working, but sweet and respectful. Great work overall, but I especially loved that image.

[Undying Glory]

wow this was very beautiful work, i love this one a lot! and i do agree, you could make a real epic poem if you elaborated and fleshed this one out.

"I would walk with the sun and the moon

If only I can see that handsome face once again

To hear that musical voice

To intertwine my hand with yours

This journey I would make for you

For you will always be my love."
wow i just loved that ending. awesome job!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem of love. True love will give all. I like the ending to the outstanding poem of love and desire.
Coyote

[Nicole]

makes me miss the one that left and when i moved away they came back and i couldnt have my 2nd chance

[Praiser]

DO YOUR THING WRITER IT SHOULD BEEN LONGER VERY Good

[Kimberly]

I like this. It's very good.

[AlisshalovesBrandon]

wow that is amazing. i love it!

[Anata]

well ... :)

This touched me in a way never to be forgotten, for what you said there is exactly how I've been feeling for a long while ....

I hope you find your way to once again see that face ;)

[steph]

this is a very sweet poem. a pleasent read