The World Around Us

Something I wrote up out of boredom.

 

I sit and ponder

As my mind wonders

Over the hills and yonder

 

My eyes scan the horizon

Watching the sun set

In all of its beauty

 

A lone hawk

Gives a screech

As he flies into a near by tree

 

He returns to his home

As I sit in the screened in porch

Watching as the deer come out

 

Watching as the lone owl

Makes his nightly prowl

Looking for his next victim to enter his bowel

 

A light chilly breeze

Enters through the screen

Ruffling my hair

 

The sky finally is black

Its endless sky’s filled with stars

                                     The world a round me is filled with a silvery glow.

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I LOVE IT! i give you 100%! great poem. :D i love how you put such feeling into it. plus i love how u put the feeling of nature into every bleeding word. and ontop of that, i love you, babe.
"you remind me of the babe" aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaagh its stuck in my brian!