Fly Away, Phoenix

I need title suggestions!! Any help would be greatly appreciated

here we are now

two halves, one whole

half-silvered mirror

to the illusive soul

the stars in your eyes are swimming

we're both holding back our tears

it comforts me just knowing

that i have you near

it comforts me just knowing

that I can hold you near

One day we'll be that phoenix

rising from the ashes 

oh, we'll spread our wings and we'll fly away 

you know we'll fly away 

fire can't touch us

rain won't drown us 

we'll be dancing in the dark

fire can't touch us

rain won't drown us 

dancing beneath the stars 

One day we'll be that phoenix

rising from the ashes 

oh, we'll spread our wings and we'll fly away 

you know we'll fly away 

here we are now,

two halves, one whole

we both are reflections

of the same resilient soul.

Reviews

[Anastasia Rae]

I really enjoyed this. However, I felt it was kind of short and repetitive and kind of generic. I think if you add more description instead of repeating the same line twice it will improve your piece. My favorite part is the last paragraph. For example if you were to say something like:
we'll run through the blazing fire and come out untouched,
we'll swim in the deepest ocean and come out dry,
it may be dark, but we're still dancing.
I think that would give it a little more depth and make it not so generic. I hope this helps!

[Zan]

Thanks for the suggestions!!! Yes, it is a little repetitive - I was writing for a melody my friend wrote so some longer phrases don't fit in :)