Cloak and dagger

Cloak and dagger

a fine silk scarf

your way with words

a blunt short sword

you smile at me

yet strike again

those dizzy blows 

create new lows

Reviews

[Shadow Paradox]

I like this :) sorta reminded me of when people deceive you and make you think they are something they are not and when you aren't looking they back stab you.

[Zan]

I don't like the last line though... but i couldn't think of anything else with a rhyme. Do you have any suggestions?

[Shadow Paradox]

No its okay, I tried to see if I could add something else but then that just changed the whole poem. I think its fine the way it is honestly.

[Zan]

Thank you!